Magical dreams of love
Eyes closed and we sounded like the ocean, some big wave rolling in to churn the smooth pebbles.
It swelled and receded, swelled and receded, swelled and swelled and swelled and we moved together,
Finally it shattered with a ragged breath into particulates expanding out into the atmosphere.
We both felt that.
Surely such energy is not all lost to entropy.
Jan 28, 2006
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"Finally it shattered with a ragged breath into particulates expanding out into the atmosphere."
ReplyDeletebeautifully written :)
You couldn't write like this if you weren't an insomniac possibly- as they say,lie back and enjoy it.
ReplyDeleteEntropy is an all-inclusive unconditional embrace,
ReplyDeletenothing is lost to her
what she holds is shared equally
with all creation
peace
You write so beautifully ..
ReplyDeleteLoved the homology - expressed celestially ..
ultimately it shatteres...but does it die? no..never...theres another man on the other side of the coffee table, some other day...theres another man on the bed... some other day...just like there are other waves...after the ones that have already broken...
ReplyDeletesome other day
some other day
Wow. What a great piece. it has a unique, ethereal sensuality about it. This can be read again and again.
ReplyDeleteEspecially, I like:
Finally it shattered with a ragged breath into particulates expanding out into the atmosphere.
Thanks for posting. You are invited to stop by my site some time to say hello.
Bye!
i love how my imagination exploded when i read this. you've a facility for allusion and you carry it well.
ReplyDeletemeow.
ReplyDeletenice pic wid a nice short n sweet post...
ReplyDeleteall d bst !!
keep writing n keep smiling :-)