The Luncheon....
She was clumsy, as he'd never suspected of her.
The smile she tried on trembled like a reflection seen in a puddle; she reached for her water glass and knocked over the salt. Quickly she pinched up a few grains and tossed it back over her left shoulder. This amused him deliciously, and a wry smile erupted on his otherwise stern face.
He wondered : What was she seeing when she looked at him? Did she see the cynic or the romantic fool. Did she guess the depth of his lonliness, or the burgeoning love he felt for the other one.
His focus dropped to her mouth, the firm discreet colour of a shell's interior. A slick of moisture from her last drink glossed her lower lip.
That mouth said, baffling him, "I don't care if you are serious about that other woman. I'm not giving up on us yet!"
He stared at her.
She stared right back, her limpid eyes ablaze....the beginning of a smile touching her eyes, a smile of triumph over her internal doubts.
Around them silverware clinked, conversation ebbed and flowed, surging in his ears like his pulse.



S.STRANGE.SIMILARITIES.
ReplyDeleteThis is very nicely written. :)
ReplyDeleteNirvana: Similiarities to whom if I may enquire?
ReplyDeleteBlue Athena: Thankee Muchly.Love the pic in your post of today.
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stranger...conversation ebbs and flows...what does it leave behinde? prattle or void...
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How delicately written i can say...I enjoyed reading the story where the woman does not give up on her man
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Based on reality?
ReplyDeleteIt seemed like a real situation.
:)
Nice. A slice of life.
And the days of our lives part II displayed on...
ReplyDeleterijula: Love your blog...and after the conversation what remains are the ECHOES...ECHOEEEEEEEEES
ReplyDeleteNasra: Thanks for dropping in.
Yvaine: Yes this is a piece right out of me life....
Devile:Yes another BLOODY DAY
thanks all for the comments.
z
ekta: Stunned me first...then a smile....
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z