Bedroom Chatter
Getting up in my bed
now empty of your presence
I find evidence
Of the most intimate kind
That says that you were here...
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- The Wandering Hermit
- I'm the precipitate of Complex Desires & bloody Genetic Spirals Fueled by a rash curiosity and a thinking mind that dwells in thoughts out of time & reason.. Bitten by Wanderlust I roam around, usually I'm A Drifter.. and part time writer of my travelogues and experiences. Aspiring Author meantime I scribble as I dribble.
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nice verse.
ReplyDeletetho a detective might say otherwise. :)
quintessential "anatomy of melancholy" ...
ReplyDeletebeautifully written ...
one query, do you read comments on previous posts??? If so, i would love to drop few comments.
Great...
ReplyDeleteI wonder something...y u use the word " Evidence "...
'I find evidence
Of the most intimate kind'..
tell me..then I ll know how right I am!
brilliant ... brilliant and brilliant ...
ReplyDeleteu had a good time ... and its reflected :)
alok
:)
ReplyDeleteYou manage to do it again & again in little verses.. love it
StandbyMind Mystic Rose: I think I have been watching too much CSI.. sort of sinks in.. plus also wanted to convey something about the fact that there are deeper issues at hand,, wheels within wheels.. and the blame game..
ReplyDeleteJyoti Yes I do read ALL comments whether new or old.. (but sometimes I can't reply to all of them.. so dont think that I don't read them, I do..
Alok
Thanks mate.
Aria: Small is sometimes all it takes to get something across more powerfully than a tome ......
Thanks all for commenting appreciate it.
i was referring to the fact that the pillow on the left is not indented like theone on the right.
ReplyDeletealso the bed covers on the left are still tucked in. :)
therefore, no one there. elementary, my dear watson.
but then sherlock holmes was never known for romance. :)
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Coincidence I guess but your bed and Sigur Ros is putting me in such a mood right now :)
ReplyDelete"...and we'll paint over the evidence..."
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